Revising&EditingI dont like the way chapter 3 came out..
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Any ideas for me.
You know that would be nice.
Im in desperate need of ideas for my book!
Well, start commenting me with ideas.
IF you have any that is...
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Some of Chapter 44. The Queen of the SkySome of Chapter 4
The wind was blowing on my face with great intensity, the breeze getting colder and colder the higher we got. I tried to glance over at Sean to see how he was managing but, I was afraid I would look down and scare myself.
Hold on…this place we’re going to is in the moon. Then…that’s means we’re… “Luna! We’re going up to space aren’t we?” I yelled, trying to fight the force of the wind.
Yes…we are. Why? The thought entered my mind without me expecting it. I guessed it would be easier then yelling, so I joined along. Well…
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Chapter 3Chapter 3-Rough RoadsChapter 3
The next day was simple and easy. I awoke with my hair a disaster and bags under my eyes. I was lucky I didn’t have to start school for another week; I needed more sleep and most importantly get rid of some stress. I didn’t bother to brush my hair and or teeth. I just wanted to get some new clothes, take a shower and then brush. I opened up the door and headed down stairs. It was grey inside, so I didn’t even bother to go check the weather.
“Char!! You up!?” No reply. “I guess he’s still sleepin’.” I ambled over to the kitchen desk and grab
by ~Moon-Lit-Byakuya
Chapter 2Chapter 2-Girl of My DreamsChapter 2
“Drake…” the voice was calm and innocent. I opened my eyes to nothing but complete black. I stood up and looked in all directions, and still there was nothing but black.
“Drake…” the voice repeated, except now it was more feminine and soothing. I began to run without telling myself too, it ran on its own intention. I had no idea where I or my body was going, all I knew was I was running nowhere. Everything was the same and the voice just kept on repeating the same name. My name. After what seemed to be a good 15 minutes if running I saw a bright light ahead o
by ~Moon-Lit-Byakuya
Prolouge and Chapter1 PrologueProlouge and Chapter1
I was having one of those days where you just want to crawl in bed, go to sleep and never wake up. I had nothing to say, or to feel. I was numb, even the pouring rain couldn't snap me back to reality. I was just lost in trains of thought- I’m moving? My mom doesn't want me, I have to live with my dad who I barely know and worst of all, I’m losing my best
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